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Hi there! I have written a paper and the first half already has feedback on it so if you vould implement the feed back that the comments say to do on the annotated copy then that would be great. Also the 2nd portion of the paper has not had any feedback or comments on it so I also need the 2nd half of the paper to be revised anf fixed like the first half of the paper was. I have attached all of the sources and powerpoints that I used. Add any new citations that you need to!
Also here was the instructors direct comment: ”
You are on the right track. You are missing a lot of specific examples in most of the sections. Be sure to watch the videos and provide examples from Lewis’s story. Please see comments and suggestions. Keep it up for the next sections!” So its VERY important to focus on that aswell.
Also any corrections or changes that you make in the paper I need you to write in red wording please.
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