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Need to Rewriting my essay (has correction in it) just need to fix the correction. 
the link is down below…
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nH3SQTcganknLuGRIf7NnMQGka8q9zAoNdMQytHA6mI/edit?usp=sharing 
Also. fix the abstract. It’s too long!!! 
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yLyHKnmWw0b3Kpx0SM8xRw6H57sUsCujrHRDENZI1xk/edit?usp=sharing
There are 27 comments (some of them are short like grammar and some are longer as u need to add a line and some are more complex bc u need to do more research to answer and others are just like concising the text for eg: ur abstract is too long) 

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