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Hello, pleas find the comment of the assignment one!! need to be fixed ASAP if you don’t mind.
This is a basic and unfocused attempt at the proposal which is unfortunately below the level required for a passing grade. The proposal would need significant changes in order to pass, which I recommend as follows:
– A much more considered and focused research aim. Your current aim is too broad; you then provide 5 different objectives which make the research even broader. As such they are not feasible. You would need to develop a much more focused and specific idea for research to ensure it can be completed successfully.
– The literature review needs to show much more engagement with academic sources – you use only one source, which is insufficient.
– Your methodology is not realistic, and so you have not demonstrated a sufficient understanding of the module content. Please review the module materials, and use them to develop a more realistic and applied approach. For example the crime records you suggest to use are likely to be highly confidential, so a more reliable data source should be identified.
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