I failed the first draft and my professor gave me this list of things to change.

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I failed the first draft and my professor gave me this list of things to change. I’m currently very sick and unable to make these changes my self. She wants me to change some things for the excel as well so if you are good at that could you make the changes please? Ive added the results from my questioner and my excel work
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In general – the paper lacks consistency between the Introduction and Conclusions parts vs what is shown in the Results section. The Introduction and Conclusions sections (esp. study objectives) are overstated and not addressed in the Analytical part. E.g. Conclusions refer to Age groups which are not analysed in the Results section. The Results section is poor, with very basic analysis of 3 questions only, and only on total sample, with no cuts into groups (gender, age or expenditure level). The only SPSS analysis refers to Descriiptive Statistics of the Sample, that only show that the sample was very much biased toward Women and is not referred to in the later part of the paper.

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