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I have been told that my thesis is not defined. I have also been told it is unclear as to what bearing the outside sources have on the paper. I have attached everything from the original instructions, to the review to the evaluators comments. I have already revised the theses statement to be more clear but any revision is helpful! I also think for simplicity sake it may be beneficial to remove the outside citations and go with support from the story instead.
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