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hello, I have completed my case study paper and my professor has left me some feedback on what I could change. I DO NOT WANT MY paper rewritten. I just want minor changes to be made based on my professors feedback. Also please include more quotes where needed they must be real quotes from real sources. NO AI USED AT ALL PLEASE!!! I have included my professors feedback down below and also the assignment detail along with my completed paper. ALSO PLEASE REVIEW FOR ANY GRAMMAR ERRORS
PROFESSOR FEEDBACK: I still think you need a stronger thesis — what is the core argument you’re making about these places? You need to go from description of the regimes into an actual argument; what does the application of these theories imply about the future of these regimes? This should be front and center in the thesis itself.
I think you need more evidence of the kind the assignment calls for — not the overviews from think tanks and various governmental and non-governmental agencies and scholars, but instead simple news reporting of current events, which you can then interpret in the context of your argument.
It is fine to emphasize modernization theory, but remember that we have many different versions of this. You should be specific. I also think, especially in the Iraq case, that it would be useful to emphasize the resource curse version of modernization. The cultural/national cohesion argument is fine, but again, you need to illustrate some of these elements (including the consequences) through news events, not the opinions of scholars.
you’ll need to make sure you are using these theories to make an argument about the prospects of democratization in these cases, not just this descriptive argument. These are the biggest gaps I see in the paper currently.
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